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    VictoriaBent

    I got in on this idea by pasturPasturevich in which tl;dr the imperial powers of Victorian Europe colonize Alternia through the magic of portals.

    The following is pP's content unless otherwise noted, reposted with his express written permission.

    This AU rests upon some fundamental assumptions:

    1. You know how Earth and Alternia reside in separate universes? Let’s just disregard that entirely.
    2. Trolls don’t use guns. It seems that we see few guns on Alternia aside from ship’s cannon, from which we can deduce that Gunpowder was never widely employed by Trolls, as well as by the Troll characters’ choice of weapons, and various references made to divisions in the Alternian army being defined by various melee weapons.
    3. I imagine that the Alternians never got very advanced in ground technology or general purpose things, even when they achieved space flight, such that, for example, when they had, in Mindfang’s time, working mechanical prosthesis, but still used sailing ships of the 18th century, such that, I imagine, during the setting of this AU, the Trolls have no steam power.

    History


    The Powers That Be


    The Cast


    Additional Ideas?


    ART:
    Last edited by Ra Zarudo; 07-21-2012 at 04:24 PM. Reason: Art & Characters updated.

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    Re: VictoriaBent

    Just posting to show my assent as well as to say that some of this is still subject to change as needed, and that feedback is appreciated, especially that which is sent to me via PM.

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    Oh hey!
    You posted my silly doodle.
    Hopefully I'll have more serious art to post soon, but for now have this silly thing colored.


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    Re: VictoriaBent

    Updated the art section.

    Also trying to figure out how the redcoats would be able to drive the Battleship Condescension back. Perhaps taking on the guerrilla tactics of those damned Colonials from back in the day?

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    You see, I intended this to take place at a time roughly equivalent with that of Mindfang's journal, rather than the current era of things, thus no interstellar empire to deal with.

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    Re: VictoriaBent

    Ah, pre-Revolution, before the Condesce banished all adult trolls.

    And when you have trolls eventually forced to choose between one Empire and another, things get interesting.

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    Aloha!
    More art! This time less silly!
    Actually, it's still silly - it just has referenced uniforms and rifles this time. : )



    Enjoy - the only British infantryman ever to have eyes that match his uniform.

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    Re: VictoriaBent

    Since this does need a bit of direction, and since LdL and I had decided on it in person before, the characters do/will have places we think they are in universe.
    Note that we have only come up with positions for a few of the characters, so this list will have to be updated as we come up with ideas.
    The list so far (in no particular order) :

    Trolls:

    Karkat:
    British Infantryman

    Tavros:
    British Lancer (Cavalry)

    Sollux:
    Austrian Light Infantry

    Equius:
    Prussian Hussar

    Eridan:
    Feferi's fish-feeder... still.

    Gamzee:
    Weird clown-cult tribe thing (Subjuggulators)

    Feferi:
    Crown Princess (or whatever) of the remnant Alternian Empire (still wish I had a map for these things)

    Rest: To Be Determined

    Humans:

    To Be Determined Also

    If you would be so kind as to add this to the top post, Ra Zarudo.

    I would like to ask actually, that a map be made for reference's sake, with the colonial holdings of the Great Powers, and the Remnants shown, were it possible.

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    Re: VictoriaBent

    Done and done.

    Eridan - Dreams of being part of the Royal Navvy.
    Vriska - Taking her FLARP dreams to the next level, she adopts the mantle of Mindfang for reals.
    Gamzee - Cossack. hOnK hOnK cOmRaDe!

    Human Ideas:
    The Prospit kids are essentially immigrating from the old world, looking for BRAEV NEW FRONTEERS.
    Jake (as Grandpa Harley?) and Jade - Attracted by the lure of new species to hunt and flora to collect, respectively, the Islander siblings have arrived on Alternia to mount expeditions into the wilderness. Jade being Asian/half-Asian - my headcanon Jade for some reason is Hawaiian - could provide an interesting twist for trolls who've only seen the Europeans. Also had the idea that she could be Jake's servant girl if we're not going with Grandpa Harley.

    John Egbert - A travelling performer and prankster from some inner city in the Western United States looking to explore BRAEV NEW HORIZONS and perhaps find an audience where his acts in the Wild West fell flat. His father has tagged along, presumably to make sure his son has arms to come crying back into when he eventually does fail. Obligatory 90s movie influence could be An American Tale.

    Jane Crocker - A prim and proper girl from New England (or just England proper) looking for a way out of a surefire path to finishing school and homemaking, she heads to New Alternia as part of, say, Scotland Yard or something. Or to start a catering business. Although she is a master of concocting the finest in baked goods, she also has a penchant for English mystery and starts solving crimes in her spare time.

    Not sure what the Dersite kids would be there for. Rose, perhaps, to find a new environment for which to pen a masterpiece. Dirk/Bro might be a hired mercenary trained in "some devilish Eastern martial art" that the empires may use to perform assassinations, in the guise of some traveling ventriloquist.

    Last edited by Ra Zarudo; 07-19-2012 at 04:09 AM.

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    Ideas for the kids sound fine, as do Gamzee and Vriska (Who I figured would be a privateer, for legal purposes, and then just do whatever she felt like doing), Eridan, I figured would eventually become the heavily overdressed Grand Marshal-Admiral (other grandiose titles may apply) of Fef's reformed empire.

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    I like the idea of Rose as a traveling anthropologist/writer.
    And I thought we were going with a Zulu inspiration for Gamzee?
    I really wanted to draw that.

    Here, have art.


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    Re: VictoriaBent

    I wasn't privy to any ideas for Gamzee at the point, so yeah, I think we could go for it. Perhaps one of the colonial powers constantly keeps him...opiated in order to keep him from going on a rampage.

    Anyhoo, more human ideas:

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    The kids sound nice, but the plan with having weird shamanistic tribal types was to have a Zulu War in the cards, or at least some kind of rebellion.

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    Re: VictoriaBent

    Ah. Perhaps the Subjugglators were the last great force of the Empire - one that very nearly held the colonials back with their unpredictable yet brutal tactics. We could have Gamzee end up being the "test subject" of either some mad scientist or some high-minded evangelist that thinks "civilizing" one of them would be his greatest challenge yet.

    Inspiration partially provided from The Loaded Key, where Gamzee's dad is apparently a bishop.

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    The point of making the comparisons to the Zulus was that having Gamzee among an equivalent group would set up an event in the time-line that could be explored by a willing writer from his viewpoint. Furthermore, I intend this to be a bit more on the Historical Fiction side, rather than the Gothic Novel side

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    Yeehah!
    New art!
    Grand Marshal Ampora, in all his finery:


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    I had wanted to wait with this until the timeline was actually finished first, but I wouldn't want this thread to die completely, so here is the timeline until 1883



    And the rest of the characters that I have imagined will be used:


    Here's hoping this thread actually gets posts from more than we three AUsqetaires
    Last edited by pasturPasturevich; 09-18-2012 at 03:08 PM.

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    Sadly, i have no ideas to add upon this already grand idea. Perhaps if i can spare the time someday, ill draw a bit for ya baised off this. Its pretty good! ^ _^

    .

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    Any art of decent quality is most certainly appreciated!

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    Indeed, any art at all, at this point :/

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    Working now on more of the time-line.
    Sorry work hasn't been done for some time, I have been busy with school work.

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    Re: VictoriaBent

    This appeals to me. It's Homestuck Historical Science-Fiction with a pinch of Steampunk. What else could someone ask for?
    My RP handle is solitaryPacifist, and my OOC is okamiMasuta.

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    Re: VictoriaBent

    Perhaps more content?
    In any case, in the coming days, I hope to have the rest of the timeline.
    At which point, with all of my main ideas as to the dispositions of characters,
    their locations, what's going on, etc., I would hope people might want to
    contribute some work, seeing as I have personally, vy little writing ability.

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    Aaaa I'm a total sucker for Victorian and Regency AUs. For some reason I really dig Jane, I really would love to draw her or see her done. And Eridan just fits perfectly?? Yeah.

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