Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Universal Heroes

[CaptainDraco]

This makes me want to do a Pokemon fan adventure, without sprites, but drawn. Too bad I'm bad at art

[Wessolf27]

>Nothing more, onwards!

[Kíeros]

> Ask about that "war".

[Pokeball]

~> Explain the war
~>HURRY UP AND GET YOUR ASS TO THE DESTINATION

As stated before the war was caused by the psychic, ghost and dark types feeling superior to all the other kinds of pokemon and oppressed, enslaved and controlled them. The oppression was caused by three legendary pokemon known as the Three Dark Generals, which is ironic. Giratina, Darkrai and Mewtwo. Giratina looked over the entire operation, guided by an unseen individual whom to this day no ones who it was. He never even informed his advisers of who this unseen hand was. Darkrai would look into the dreams of the many pokemon to see if any uprisings or problems were to be had, those caught with rebellious dream were executed. Mewtwo was the force, keeping all of the slaves working as quickly as possible, even through injury. This was a dark point in History, literally, all the green and life had appeared to have been sucked out of all life on the planet making it all a shade of depressing grey. Soon a group of heroes, Lucario, Nidoking and Gardevoir created a rebellion to fight back. They planned carefully and became insomniacs to prevent Darkrai from learning their plans. Gardevoir was actually Mewtwo's apprentice and was taught very powerful psychic moves through confiscated Technical Machines (TMs). She didn't want any harm to come to the innocent pokemon whom were discriminated against for type. Damn Typists. They gathered an army of slaves on the day of the rebellion with no real warning to make a surprise attack on them. Evidently, they succeeded and Lucario died in battle and was laid to rest in a tomb located at the heart of the Bureau. No one really knows what happened to the Three Dark Generals as no one killed them nor did they find any bodies. So its possible that they could still be around.



As Carmen finishes explaining you reach the entrance to the Dungeon. You hop off Rolly who seems to have passed out whether due to fear now realizing that this was the surprise or because he was incredibly dizzy. Either way, this is no time for a nap and you think even less of Rolly. What a Butt Monkey. So, What will you do?

AWTHOR COMET

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I apologize for the bad art, i know its not incredible. Maybe you love it, maybe you hate it. Would you like to see more of this kind of art? I can make moar if you guys want but hey, I'm just the author/artist, its your call. If its terrible and has offended you in some way then here is a Signature thing for you, even if it isn't offensive to you, you should have a signature thing anyways because you can. YAY FOR SIGNATURE THINGS.

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Just paste it into your signature and you should be good!

[Sparky Young Upstart]

Blimey that's dark! Shoot some lightning down that entrance and see what you can see!

[BenBen]

Shock Rolly awake again.

[Storm]

Use Flash.

[Shailsnic]

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Looks fine to me! I would like to see more of it! (It's better than my attempts at a pokemon =/) It's your choice though in the end.

>Ask about nearby town and its citizens.

[Wessolf27]

>Use Flash

[causticlyOptimitious]

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The only picture that truly sucks is the one you never draw. *nodnod*

...well, that and the 2d spidermans done by 10-year olds with no concept of depth. But yours isn't, uh... that.... I mean, it's... not exactly....

Erm....

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I kid, of course. It looks fine.

Carmen: Lead the way!
Group: Encounter final boss.

[CaptainDraco]

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Loving the new art! Don't worry, I'm just as 'bad'(if you put it as bad, or that skilled). And I may be making a Pokemon related an adventure!

All:Enter Dungeon.

[Pokeball]

~> Everyone: Enter
~> Spark: Flash

You enter the dungeon and suddenly the door is gone and you have no idea where you are. Carmen informs you that the party is currently in Guardian Garden, Its very dark and you want to use flash but you can't because you don't know that move yet and you can't learn it naturally. You would flash in a more ironic sense if you could but you don't have the clothes to do so, back home you're TOTALLY RIPPED and Carmen would PROBABLY GET A NOSE BLEED because your MIGHTY SMEXY. Luckily for you since Carmen's tail is kind of ON FIRE, it provides sufficient light for you. You proceed to travel through the dungeons layers through carefully carved stairs, because THAT MAKES SENSE IN A FOREST


You also find a few items in the dungeon, its not much but hey, you can only carry a 3 things in total anyways, one for each of you. You find an Apple which you give to Rolly because he is a fat ass who no one likes. Carmen gets an Oran berry, and you found a nice seed thing that's hot to the touch. You have no idea what it does but hey, Its a cool seed thing that might come in handy, it also looks kind of tasty You found about twenty rocks too, which you are keeping inside Rolly's mouth. Its the best.place.ever.


You fight through low leveled enemies that are completely useless against the three of you, Rolly is sort of useful... sort of... you soon reach the end of the Dungeon. He manages to carry his weight and you all reach Level 7, Carmen has also learned her first fire move making the dungeon sufficiently easier. By the end of it your stats and load out look like this:



You enter a brightly lit room and in front of you is a large building on a cliff of white soapstone, two torches burn brightly and you can feel the intensity, By the steps is a a much larger pokemon and probably the most leveled of the pokemon you've seen. There stands a Beedrill, roughly level 10 or 12, along with 2 Poochyena, higher level then the level 2s and 3s you were fighting earlier. You can hear Rolly shaking, he is nervous out of his skull. He better not swallow your damn rocks. Carmen looks extra pumped as her goal stands right behind the boss, This is it. Its either you die or become Guardians, what will you do?

AWTHOR COMET:

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I'm sorry i didn't show much of the dungeon, but honestly it wouldn't be that exciting. Also, i hope that one day i can make the boss battles [S] Updates but you'll have to make due with what i can give ya On that note, what does everyone think of this so far? Good? bad? should i rot in a pit filled with spiders? I have no clue. Just Let me know your thoughts

[Shailsnic]

YOU FIGHT!

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I like it so far, but i think I already said that! XD

[Kíeros]

> Call them out on a challenge. Be as overconfident as physically possible, if not more.

[BenBen]

Throw Rolly at them. The rocks in his mouth should give him enough weight to knock them out.

[Wessolf27]

>Better just talk to them, and ask if they could sign up for the guild.

[mysticCharlatan]

Resist the urge to charge without first asking if this is a guild member.

Subsequently fail to resist the urge.

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You're doing great so far, and we're barely out of the gate, figuratively speaking. Keep it up!

[TobiasMoon]

Spark and Rolly should use Thundershock and Bubble to attack at range while Carmen Growls to lower their attack. She can then use Ember on the Beedrill when it gets close enough.

[Pokeball]

No update today due to socialization. The next update will be good though! i promise! Lots of Gifs, it may not be an [S] update but it will be a very GIF-y update . Also, i really enjoy feed back so anything you've noticed, want to see moar of, less of, just whatever. I do read every post and am excited to see when people give fun commands. Sorry for the inconvenience

[CaptainDraco]

I loved the drawing part, keep practicing!

[TobiasMoon]

May I request that when they get into the guild that the co-ordinator for new recruits is a Luxio/Luxray?

[Pokeball]

Couldnt finish update today, i had to visit my Grandma in the Hospital It'll be Friday for sure and you guys will like "WOOOOOW DATZ SO COOL HOWD HE DO DAT?!" and ill be like "I know " Anyways, i felt like you guys needed something so i present to you...

FILLUR DOODLEZ #1: THA TEEM

Carmen looks awesome with Lip stick and eyelashes :3

Keep leaving suggestions for stuff to, even if it isn't currently applicable, you can still input commands and ill do my best to put them in future updates! See you Tomorrow :P

[Cleric of Zeal]

Currently inapplicable...
Spark: Be the very best. Like no one ever was.

> Press A+B+DOWN

[Insert Phallic Reference Here]: Use harden.

[Pokeball]

~> C S R: VS BEEDRILL

You take a step closer into the bright room and size up the competition. He appears no more then Freshly evolved and the two poochyena are roughly level 8. You played a lot of Pokemon growing up so you know they have the moves Tackle and Howl, nothing too different from anything you've seen but too many Howls could make this go poorly. You do the best thing you can possibly do, you yell and are an overconfident prick. So this is really nothing new.

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Spark: Yo "Stripes", Is this the Bureau?
Beedrill: Why Yezz, it izz. What Buzzinezz do you have?
Carmen: We have come to be Guardians
Rolly: I-if you don't mind...
Spark: Shut up Rolly, don't swallow my rocks. So I'm assuming you're a Guardian?
Beedrill: Yezz, i am and am currently on watch. Thuzz meaning you muzt pazzt me firzt
Poochyena: Us Too! Us Too!
Spark: Group Huddle!

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Spark: Wanna try our new combo we talked about?
Rolly: ishnt it a tad dangeroush?
Spark: I swear if one Rock is missing. I think we should, it'll let us flaunt our skill to the Guardians, right?
Carmen: I agree with Spark. Lets to Do this.

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Spark: Alright Guys Let's do this!
Carmen: You ready, Rolly?
Rolly: Sh-short of...
Spark: Good enough!
Carmen: Triple Combo!
Rolly: C S R Vershion 1!
Spark Carmen Rolly: BOUNCE PASS SMASH

You begin phase I, and tail whip as fast as you can. This part of the plan is crucial for success. The enemy is confused as hell but you keep spinning like Rolly's mom at the stripe club. You keep spinning and their defence keeps droppin', AW YEAH. Time to begin phase II.



You continue to spin and Rolly curls up in a ball. You will murder him if your rocks are missing or if he screws this up. Carmen uses Scratch on Rolly, and smashes him at the Left Poochyena, She immediately takes a step back to prepare for Phase III. With such lowered defense the Poochyena is taken down easily and quickly. Rolly bounces off of him and back at Carmen who smacks him at Spark. Rolly is bashed by the propultion of the tail wags and hits the other poochyena, still somewhat shocked at the quick defeat of his assumed brother. Rolly makes contact and wipes him out too before rolling back to your front lines. Rolly has fainted due to dizziness but his role is far from over. You stop spinning and get your bearings, still somewhat dazed.



The Bedrill is shocked and impressed, never before has he seen a useless move like "tail whip" used so effectively and strategically. Rolly lays passed out between you and Carmen, breathing heavily through the mouth full of rocks. Yes you mention the rocks a lot. Its because the rocks are important.

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Beedrill: Okay you've taken out my weaker pawnzz, but how are you going to defeat me?
Carmen: We-
Spark: You Talkin' to me?
Beedrill: Wha?
Spark: You Talkin' to me?
Beedrill: What are you-?
Spark: You Talkin' to me?
Beedrill: I guezz? Why do-
Spark: well who the hell else are you talkin' to?... You talkin to me?
Beedrill: I really dont get whatzz-
Spark: Well I'm the only one here. Who the fuck do you think you're talking to?
Beedrill: But you're friendzz are-
Spark: Oh yeah?
Beedrill: Yezz?
Spark: Okay.

You grab the weak and passed out Rolly and arm yourself with him. Shits about to get real all up in this bitch. Carmen has no idea what you're doing but caught your Taxi Driver reference, you can tell by the smirk and half giggle she made. You point Rolly's mouth at the Beedrill

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Spark: You wanna Fuck with me? Okay. You wanna play rough? Okay.
Beedrill: Oh no...

Spark:SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND!

You don't know how but you get Rolly to shoot your rocks, and it is fucking awesome. You unleash a hail of stone bullets onto the poor guy until Rolly stops spitting them out, alerting you that you are now empty and need a new cartridge of Rocks for your "Rolly-gun".



You set Rolly down for him to rest before you yourself sit down. Boss fights are freaking tiring. The Beedrill lays in a defeated heap (probably mortally wounded) and Carmen checks on Rolly. Letting you know that he is alive still. You're tired, your friend is passed out and you've beaten the boss, meaning you can become Guardians if you so wish... What will you do?

AWTHOR COMETS:

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I. hate. GIFs. >:U Thank you for your patience for this update! :3

[CzBacklash]

>Finish him. Do no walk away without making sure he's down for the count. With your luck if you leave the area he'll be back and be your annoying reoccurring rival. And good Arceus, you sure as hell don't want one of those.