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    Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Hi guys. This is a fanfic I've been working on for a while. I supposed you can call it an AU, but it's that only in the broadest definition of the term. This is the story of an aging Knight, the last surviving member of his group, on his way to fight an enemy he can't hope to defeat. Knowing he is unlikely to survive, he writes the chronicles of his session and his fallen friends, so that future players might learn from their mistakes.

    Today the world will burn,
    As fiery death from heavens rained
    Upon once mighty stronghold down
    From earth all trace of Breath is drained.

    Today the world will drown
    Its Void is filed with endless dread
    Its Hope is snuffed and gone
    Its Heart replaced with Lifeless lead.

    Today the world is dead,
    Its endless Space consumed by hate
    The fury of its Rage, now ash
    Oblivion will be its fate.

    Today the world is dark,
    Its very Mind by tyrant crushed
    And nothing here reminds,
    But Sands and Stars and rust.

    Prologue:


    Chapter 1



    Chapter 2


    Chapter 3


    Dramatis personae (The cast)



    Comments or questions are highly appreciated.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Make sure to preiview you post and adjust spacing there. Just add a blank line between paragraphs and it'll be good.

    Also, Dramtis Personae is an awesome thing: I'd recommend it for this, because you're introducing numerous major character right off the bat. Just a name list and a tiny fragment behind each. Like "Adrian Veris: Bright Blade and Heir of Hope".
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    So long, thanks for all the fish...

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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Good idea, I'll add this.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    It's pretty nice.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Chapter four is here, introducing some new characters.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Chapter five is here, providing some information about the nature of the session and of its Medium. It's a bit on the short side.

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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Just a note, I'll continue writing this after mid terms are over, in about two weeks.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Alright, I took the time to write a short interlude. It is a bit different.


    By the way, if anyone is actually reading this it would be good to know. I feel like I'm just throwing words into the ether here,
    Last edited by Dmatix; 02-25-2012 at 01:32 PM.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    I'm reading this.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Quote Originally Posted by PriffyViole View Post
    I'm reading this.
    Good to know. Chapter six will most likely be out this weekend, as mid-terms are finally coming to an end.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Aaand my laptop's screen broke. While it's being repaired, the fic will have to wait. Bluh.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    I like every word of this :3
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Quote Originally Posted by IDSeeker View Post
    I like every word of this :3
    Glad to hear it. It's a real shame my computer's down, the next episode was more than halfway done.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Well, I hope you can get back to work as soon as possible XD
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Alright, here is chapter six. Once again, a bit on the short side.

    Last edited by Dmatix; 03-13-2012 at 12:17 PM.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    I really like this. Keep it up!

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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Quote Originally Posted by ero98 View Post
    I really like this. Keep it up!
    Seconded
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Thanks for the patience. New episode should be here tomorrow, Tuesday at the latest.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    yay
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Alright, here is chapter 7. It give some explanation on the strangeness of the session and on the nature of the Dey. If you like it, do let me know.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    So... What's happening here is that he's like... Talking to skaia? Or something like that?

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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Quote Originally Posted by ero98 View Post
    So... What's happening here is that he's like... Talking to skaia? Or something like that?
    There is a grain of truth in that, although it's far from the whole story. Wait and see.
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Well now you've piqued my curiosity. I anxiously await the next chapter.

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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    *Can't wait for next chapter*
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    Re: Last Journey of the Knight of Sands

    Next chapter will be out in a day or two. I finally got some time off to write it.
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