Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
> Herschel: Bring an awesome soundtrack.
> Chester carried a large tree without effort, so don't hold back.
> Maybe there is a way to bring a Gamesphere into the game with you. The mapping functionality would be really handy if nothing else.
((For whichever side possesses it.))
> Victoria: Have another useful vision.
I will post proof-reading results in-thread to avoid duplication. Unless trulyElse wants to take over completely (they are in a better timezone for it), in which case I could switch to another adventure. (There are some out there that seriously need it.)
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
gamesphere controller in hand
* Gamesphere
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
You are currently piling as many items that you can think of
You might want "as many items as" here rather than "as many items that".
There is no word of sufficient nuance and complexity to describe your relationship with it. I hereby commission SleepingOrange to devise one.
™ Slikutkilst ™
Originally Posted by Draykon
Andrew's policy of 'antialiasing is for squares'
Originally Posted by tynic
I do my best moderating drunk. Kind of a snippy bitch when sober, actually.
Originally Posted by Miff
Originally Posted by Mubbles
Originally Posted by willgame4food
I have a feeling I'll sound stupid saying this, but what is a jailed avatar? I've never heard of such a thing?
it's the avatar you get when you're jailed.
Honest-to-god, I thought that was KawaiiMelon's actual avatar.
Originally Posted by Ed
You're kidding, right? I mean it has all these memorable characters with tons of quirks, and they also use the internet. Also homestuck is different, it's not like everything else, it is very clever and also makes fun of things. Like shipping, by including ships in the comic, popular things like, twilight and pokemon. It's also very complex yet so simple, you just have to backtrack a lot to understand every minor detail, i also love getting hocked on a plot point and then just change perspective to another character who happens to know everything about everything and everyone else who talks to that character are like WUT?!? It also has it's own memes, because memes are the pinnacle of humor.
You're rude and ignorant, Ben.
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
They will be willing to do such a thing for free if you make your work fandom-friendly, as fandom-types will devote sicknasty amounts of time under the abstract pretense that they are becoming an integral pillar of the fandom as a whole. Such a thing will win them fandom points and credits, which are good at any participating FanCon booths for the value of one free art of equal or lesser value. 4f4]Now to work on a flash where I 4f4]zoom in, pan across and zoom out 4f4]of other artists' detailed drawings at five seconds a piece.
This is called crowudsourcking in the business world and it is the newest way marketing departments across the globe have found a way to cut costs while ceasing to do anything creative themselves whatsoever so they can do more coke
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
I, on the other hand, think that efficiency is more desirable than length. Any author can have a plot ebb out with enough updates simply by introducing more and more characters or foreshadowing and backshadowing and and having every single cause and effect chain together to make a gimmick clown alien seemingly essential to your plot because he made a plush toy appear with nebulous anger powers.
*Door opening*
W: Good God.
D: Mr Sherlock Holmes
SH: Welcome, Count Dracula.
*Dramatic music*
-- Sherlock Holmes v Dracula
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
L&V: Converse.
You sit in the kitchen with Victoria and an awkward silence descends. Now that you are both aware of recent events, there doesn't seem to be much to say. However, after much coughing and false starts, you manage to get a reasonable conversation going.
Dialog:
"Are you certain you don't want any tea?"
"1'm f1ne, 7hanks"
"I don't blame you."
"I don't know who bought this stuff."
"But they obviously got their money's worth."
"no7 very good, 7hen"
"Not at all."
"But at least I can still read the leaves."
"oh, you do 7ha7?"
"for your v1s1ons or wha7ever?"
"It doesn't actually help."
"It's more like when someone reads their horoscope for a laugh."
"I just got into the habit."
"Does this look like a fish to you?"
"um..."
"more l1ke a dog, 1f you ask me"
"Damn it."
"you know your eyes look really red"
"They get irritated very easily."
"I'm surprised you never noticed."
"never really pa1d a77en71on"
"...wha7 are you do1ng?"
"The blindfold helps keep the light out."
"Lessens the irritation."
"o...kay?"
"1s th1s a v1s1on 7h1ng 7oo?"
"Sometimes it helps, yes."
"And sometimes it is completely usele-"
Victoria's head meets the table before she has a chance to finish the sentence.
>Henrick: Save a life.
Okay, is this guy serious? Of all the times to decide to leave the Cave, he chooses this?
Chatlog:
CS: ||=0 Hershel.
CS: ||==+ Of all the ideas you've ever had.
CS: ||==[ This has got to be the stupidest.
SQ: What?
SQ: No way.
SQ: This gggggame is awesome.
SQ: I'm gggggoing in.
CS: ||==> No, you are not.
CS: ||=? Don't you see how dangerous things are in there?
SQ: Yeah, and that's why I'm gggggetting prepared.
CS: ||=0 No.
CS: ||==[ I'm forbidding you.
SQ: Oh cccccome on.
SQ: You let Kkkkkay go!
CS: ||==> That was a matter of life and death.
CS: ||=0 Hold on a second.
cardinalStrategist began chatting with cleverDjinn
CS: ||=0 Hey Kaylyn.
CD: Daaarling!
CD: So goood to hear from yooou.
CD: Aaare you alright?
CS: ||==+ I'm fine.
CS: ||=? Could you help me out with something?
cleverDjinn began chatting with synthesizedQuintessence
CD: Yooou're goooing to leave the Caaave?
SQ: Yep.
SQ: Dddddon't tell me you're going to tttttry to stop me tttttoo.
CD: Of cooourse I aaam!
CD: My big jooob in this gaaame is to keeep everyone saaafe!
CD: And the best waaay to do thaaat is to keeep you OOOUT of the gaaame.
CD: Hellooo?
CD: Are you ignoring meee?
SQ: Nnnnno sorry.
SQ: I've just got tttttwo windows open here.
SQ: How do you put it inttttto one?
>Chester: Soberify.
That is definitely not a word. Just saying.
You come out of your drug induced episode and find yourself in a boat sailing on the strangest Sea you can think of. You suppose Kaylyn must have bartered passage on it to... wherever Liz is now. Speaking of Kaylyn, she is currently sitting in front of her screen trying to mess around with the chat options. After she explains what she is trying to do, some half recalled memory of yours stirs. Maybe if you just...
Chatlog:
supremeSingularity began chatting with Everybody
SS: Guys.
SS: Look up at what I did.
SS: That will make this whole mess easier.
synthesizedQuintessence began chatting with Everybody
SQ: So now we've got everyone on the line?
cleverDjinn began chatting with Everybody
CD: Alriiight where were weee?
cardinalStrategist began chatting with Everybody
CS: ||==[ We were convincing Hershel that going into the game is a horrible idea.
SQ: I dddddon't see what the ppppproblem is.
SS: Are you serious?
SS: You're not serious, are you?
SS: I take back everything I ever said about you being smart.
SS: By Vulcan have you been completely ignoring how it's one disaster to another in here?
CD: Well everybooody's safe riiight now.
SS: Shut it you're not helping.
CS: ||==> Hey don't tell my girlfriend to shut it!
CD: Thaaank you Daaarling.
unknownShadow began chatting with Everybody
US: hey :}
SS: Oh great.
CD: Liz deeear, we're trying to haaave an intervention heeere.
SQ: Alright, inppppput appreciated.
SQ: I'm gggggoing in now.
CS: ||=0 Alright stop.
US: :]
CS: ||=? What kind of friend would I be if I sent you rushing to your death?
SS: Apparently just as good as you are a boyfriend.
CS: ||==+ First of all, that sentence was just awkward to read.
US: :>
CS: ||==> You're better than that Chester.
CD: (Shift + 0 deeear)
CS: ||=0 Secondly I only sent Kaylyn in because she would have died otherwise.
US: :)
SQ: Wait, dddddied?
SQ: What?
CD: Appaaarently entering the gaaame heals you.
SS: Right, I had a gunshot wound before I entered.
SS: It was gone as soon as I entered.
CS: ||=0 Damn it something's up with Victoria.
CS: ||==+ I'm going to go check on her.
CS: ||==[ Keep Hershel where he is while I'm gone.
cardinalStrategist ceased chatting with Everybody
SS: What about Victoria?
CD: Keeep it in your paaants, lover-boy.
US: i didnt hear about you getting hurt kay
SS: Futuo Liz.
SS: Keep up with the conversation.
SQ: Look ggggguys, this is really nice.
SQ: Bbbbbut I'm going to have to enttttter eventually anyway.
CD: Whaaat are you talking abooout?
SQ: It's in the ggggguide.
SQ: Appppparently we're "dddddestined" to enter at some pppppoint.
SS: So basically anyone who starts playing is doomed, huh?
poeticCavalier began chatting with Everybody
PC: Oops.
CD: Geoooffrey?
PC: Hey Kay.
SS: Well look at that.
SS: PC, just walk away from the Gamesphere.
SS: That will prove Hershel wrong.
US: hi1
SS: Missed the shift key there.
SQ: Look, you ggggguys are going to need as mmmmmuch help as you ccccan get.
SS: You're not entering, and that's final.
eternalSolitood began chatting with Everybody
ES: kan ie ofer a kompremiez?
ES: hershel keeps gettin redee
ES: and onlee enterz wen yoo gies need him
ES: trust mee it wont take long
SS: You again.
PC: Jon?
PC: What are you doing playing this game?
SS: You know this clown?
ES: damit ie went too far agan
CD: Whaaat is going on?
ES: noe noe iem not deelin with thee stupid paradox stuf
ES: yoo gies wil figyur it owt soon
eternalSolitood ceased chatting with Everybody
US: hi!
SS: Great.
SS: Is there anyone else that wants to butt into this conversation?
comicallyUnhelpful began chatting with Everybody
CU: heYa
SS: gtbghbhyjuhyuy6tty66ggggggg
CD: Stop with the headbaaanging.
US: hi lemat!
CU: hOw are yoU lIz?
SS: That's it, I'm out.
SS: Enjoy getting yourself killed.
US: im fine
SQ: Um...
CU: Do you thInk we can talk in private?
US: sure
CU: Okay!
unknownShadow ceased chatting with Everybody
CU: see you laTer hershel
comicallyUnhelpful ceased chatting with Everybody
SQ: Okay...
synthesizedQuintessence ceased chatting with Everybody
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Well that seems to be the longest chatlog I've ever typed.
In other news, thanks to Lindsay and Victoria's conversation there, this adventure finally passes the Bechdel Test! It's not really an achievement, just thought I'd note that.
Last edited by mysticCharlatan; 05-18-2012 at 02:20 AM.
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
> Liz: Speak with Lemat
Just clicked that Chester types with black, and his chumhandle is SS. Great Googlymoogly don't be foreshadowing. Although...
That conferrence-chat really helped compare the personalities of all the characters and cement their dynammics in a way that couldn't have been done in one-on-one chatlogs. Kudos.
At the start of the chat, Ches says who where he meant whole. That's the only typo I noticed, but I'm not explicitly reading for those; I'm reading for the story, characters, writing style, etc.
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> Henrick: Flashback to your girlfriend being nearly cut in half. Argh gotta get Victoria into the game right now!
> Lindsay: Make sure Victoria doesn't choke on her tongue or anything. She needs a Medic Alert bracelet for these visions.
> Mr Raines: Seek Jon.
> Geoffrey: Muck around with cane while you wait.
> Why are you all gathered together in this house anyway if you aren't going to play?
> Chester: Try a more systematic exercise of touching stuff against the "surface" the Sea. Ask the boatman if one can do it safely.
> Hershel: Stop packing, you are missing out on some important exposition there!
> Lindsay: Consider how to bring your dog into the game. He would help to even the odds.
EDIT: OK that is quite a lot of commands isn't it? There are so many characters on the go though.
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
SS: By Vulcan have you been completely ignoring how it's one disaster to another in here?
The phrasing is a little odd. I would say "going from one disaster to another" or "one disaster after another".
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
[COLOR="#990033"]CS: ||=0 Damn it somethings up with Victoria.
* something's
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
SS: Futuo Liz.
I finally got round to looking this one up, and being female she is not literally capable of it.
Wow, all that text and I spotted so little, and with a long delay. If you would only make more errors I would have an easier time of it.
Last edited by simon.clarkstone; 05-16-2012 at 04:55 PM.
There is no word of sufficient nuance and complexity to describe your relationship with it. I hereby commission SleepingOrange to devise one.
™ Slikutkilst ™
Originally Posted by Draykon
Andrew's policy of 'antialiasing is for squares'
Originally Posted by tynic
I do my best moderating drunk. Kind of a snippy bitch when sober, actually.
Originally Posted by Miff
Originally Posted by Mubbles
Originally Posted by willgame4food
I have a feeling I'll sound stupid saying this, but what is a jailed avatar? I've never heard of such a thing?
it's the avatar you get when you're jailed.
Honest-to-god, I thought that was KawaiiMelon's actual avatar.
Originally Posted by Ed
You're kidding, right? I mean it has all these memorable characters with tons of quirks, and they also use the internet. Also homestuck is different, it's not like everything else, it is very clever and also makes fun of things. Like shipping, by including ships in the comic, popular things like, twilight and pokemon. It's also very complex yet so simple, you just have to backtrack a lot to understand every minor detail, i also love getting hocked on a plot point and then just change perspective to another character who happens to know everything about everything and everyone else who talks to that character are like WUT?!? It also has it's own memes, because memes are the pinnacle of humor.
You're rude and ignorant, Ben.
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
They will be willing to do such a thing for free if you make your work fandom-friendly, as fandom-types will devote sicknasty amounts of time under the abstract pretense that they are becoming an integral pillar of the fandom as a whole. Such a thing will win them fandom points and credits, which are good at any participating FanCon booths for the value of one free art of equal or lesser value. 4f4]Now to work on a flash where I 4f4]zoom in, pan across and zoom out 4f4]of other artists' detailed drawings at five seconds a piece.
This is called crowudsourcking in the business world and it is the newest way marketing departments across the globe have found a way to cut costs while ceasing to do anything creative themselves whatsoever so they can do more coke
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
I, on the other hand, think that efficiency is more desirable than length. Any author can have a plot ebb out with enough updates simply by introducing more and more characters or foreshadowing and backshadowing and and having every single cause and effect chain together to make a gimmick clown alien seemingly essential to your plot because he made a plush toy appear with nebulous anger powers.
*Door opening*
W: Good God.
D: Mr Sherlock Holmes
SH: Welcome, Count Dracula.
*Dramatic music*
-- Sherlock Holmes v Dracula
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
>Mr. Raines: Seek Jon.
What? Why would you do a thing like that?
There's still daylight out, let the kid have some fun for an hour or two more. You have work to do. You have to get inspired, man.
Eh, maybe you'll give him a little longer. So long as he's back before it gets too dark out. Then you two can go stargazing together. You love stargazing with that little squirt, especially when the moon is full. Its just like... its like a big white disc of magic hanging up there in the sky.
Magical man. Just plain magical.
There you go. Inspiration. Now time for some magic.
>Lindsay: Make sure Victoria doesn't choke on her tongue or anything.
Apart from mumbling sweet nothings into the table, she seems fine. It's not like an epileptic fit or anything. You finish cleaning up the tea she spilled when Henry makes it down the stairs to find out what happened. Victoria seems to be coming to now, and she's mumbling some sort of apology.
The doorbell rings, startling her into full wakefulness. All three of you in the kitchen look at one another. Who on Earth could that be?
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A quick update: I'm going to be away for the upcoming weekend, so there will most likely be no updates until Monday. Keep those commands coming in the meantime, I'll try and make an update worth the wait when I get back!
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
> Henry: Is there one of those viewing-glass dealies embedded in the door? Check through that before deciding whether or not to open the door. Could be the Suburban Sniper.
We'll see you monday, then. Although given my timezone it'll probably be tuesday.Irrelevant.
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
> Mr. Raines: Contact synthesizedQuintessence.
((Interconnections!))
> Someone: Catch up with Supernal Swordsman.
> Portal detector: Make that noise again.
((Well, maybe not yet.))
> Pirates: Attack the Vessel.
> Jon: Read sword.
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Originally Posted by Draykon
Andrew's policy of 'antialiasing is for squares'
Originally Posted by tynic
I do my best moderating drunk. Kind of a snippy bitch when sober, actually.
Originally Posted by Miff
Originally Posted by Mubbles
Originally Posted by willgame4food
I have a feeling I'll sound stupid saying this, but what is a jailed avatar? I've never heard of such a thing?
it's the avatar you get when you're jailed.
Honest-to-god, I thought that was KawaiiMelon's actual avatar.
Originally Posted by Ed
You're kidding, right? I mean it has all these memorable characters with tons of quirks, and they also use the internet. Also homestuck is different, it's not like everything else, it is very clever and also makes fun of things. Like shipping, by including ships in the comic, popular things like, twilight and pokemon. It's also very complex yet so simple, you just have to backtrack a lot to understand every minor detail, i also love getting hocked on a plot point and then just change perspective to another character who happens to know everything about everything and everyone else who talks to that character are like WUT?!? It also has it's own memes, because memes are the pinnacle of humor.
You're rude and ignorant, Ben.
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
They will be willing to do such a thing for free if you make your work fandom-friendly, as fandom-types will devote sicknasty amounts of time under the abstract pretense that they are becoming an integral pillar of the fandom as a whole. Such a thing will win them fandom points and credits, which are good at any participating FanCon booths for the value of one free art of equal or lesser value. 4f4]Now to work on a flash where I 4f4]zoom in, pan across and zoom out 4f4]of other artists' detailed drawings at five seconds a piece.
This is called crowudsourcking in the business world and it is the newest way marketing departments across the globe have found a way to cut costs while ceasing to do anything creative themselves whatsoever so they can do more coke
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
I, on the other hand, think that efficiency is more desirable than length. Any author can have a plot ebb out with enough updates simply by introducing more and more characters or foreshadowing and backshadowing and and having every single cause and effect chain together to make a gimmick clown alien seemingly essential to your plot because he made a plush toy appear with nebulous anger powers.
*Door opening*
W: Good God.
D: Mr Sherlock Holmes
SH: Welcome, Count Dracula.
*Dramatic music*
-- Sherlock Holmes v Dracula
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
>Henry: Is there one of those viewing-glass dealies embedded in the door? Check through that before deciding whether or not to open the door. Could be the Suburban Sniper.
Well yes. Yes there is. But you're certain that isn't what it is called. There has to be a more suitable name for it. Like...
Like...
Wow, you are really drawing a blank here. What in the bloody hell are you suppose to call that viewing-glass dealy?
Whatever, you can think of one later. You look through the whatever-it-is-supposed-to-be-called and are greeted by a sight that should be one of the strangest things you've ever seen. Unfortunately, with all of the weird stuff you've been watching on the game screen, this only just barely makes the top ten.
A small child, about twelve or so by the look of him, stands just in front of the door. Just about every visible part of him is either caked with dirt and mud or obscured by soot. His hair, which is dirty enough that you probably wouldn't put money down on its actual colour, is a wild mess. In his right hand he holds a phone which is as dirty as he is but apparently still functioning somehow. In his left is a sword, which inexplicably seems to have been untouched by whatever this kid got caught up in and gleams brightly in the sunlight that filters down through the clouds. Judging by the way he's holding it and the trail that travels up to the door, he's been dragging it around for quite some distance.
You open the door, more out of numb reflex than anything else. Should the fact that none of this phases you right now worry you? (hint: Yes. Yes it should.)
"||=0 Hello?"
"hay iz vikkee hear?"
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Aaand I'm back. Got home later than I expected, but I managed to get an update up, just as promised!
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
CHILD ASSASSINS: Made about 50% less awesome by the fact that they exist in real life. Things Biographay Channel has taught me.
But anyway,
>Yes. Vicki iz hear.
>Vicki: Reunite with loving husband and son sword and child you just met today.
The idea is to gender-reverse "wife and daughter" to "husband and son", and then completely abandon the whole thing while still preserving some semblance of a reference joke. Does it work (i.e., did you get it before opening this spoiler)?
Active Adventures (awaiting suggestions): PersonS-like Persona, but not | An Aranor Adventure-high fantasy and adventure | Odd One Out-3 best friends, a kidnapped girl, an evil king, and elves | Beasts-a tale of survival | The Longest Flashback-fantasy noir, or something like that | GUIH-raising a dragon is harder than it sounds. | MageBound-Fantasy+"Stuck" | Creation-wherein the readers are the mind of a universe's omnipotent god | The College of Magic-pretty much what it says on the tin
There is no word of sufficient nuance and complexity to describe your relationship with it. I hereby commission SleepingOrange to devise one.
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Originally Posted by Draykon
Andrew's policy of 'antialiasing is for squares'
Originally Posted by tynic
I do my best moderating drunk. Kind of a snippy bitch when sober, actually.
Originally Posted by Miff
Originally Posted by Mubbles
Originally Posted by willgame4food
I have a feeling I'll sound stupid saying this, but what is a jailed avatar? I've never heard of such a thing?
it's the avatar you get when you're jailed.
Honest-to-god, I thought that was KawaiiMelon's actual avatar.
Originally Posted by Ed
You're kidding, right? I mean it has all these memorable characters with tons of quirks, and they also use the internet. Also homestuck is different, it's not like everything else, it is very clever and also makes fun of things. Like shipping, by including ships in the comic, popular things like, twilight and pokemon. It's also very complex yet so simple, you just have to backtrack a lot to understand every minor detail, i also love getting hocked on a plot point and then just change perspective to another character who happens to know everything about everything and everyone else who talks to that character are like WUT?!? It also has it's own memes, because memes are the pinnacle of humor.
You're rude and ignorant, Ben.
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
They will be willing to do such a thing for free if you make your work fandom-friendly, as fandom-types will devote sicknasty amounts of time under the abstract pretense that they are becoming an integral pillar of the fandom as a whole. Such a thing will win them fandom points and credits, which are good at any participating FanCon booths for the value of one free art of equal or lesser value. 4f4]Now to work on a flash where I 4f4]zoom in, pan across and zoom out 4f4]of other artists' detailed drawings at five seconds a piece.
This is called crowudsourcking in the business world and it is the newest way marketing departments across the globe have found a way to cut costs while ceasing to do anything creative themselves whatsoever so they can do more coke
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
I, on the other hand, think that efficiency is more desirable than length. Any author can have a plot ebb out with enough updates simply by introducing more and more characters or foreshadowing and backshadowing and and having every single cause and effect chain together to make a gimmick clown alien seemingly essential to your plot because he made a plush toy appear with nebulous anger powers.
*Door opening*
W: Good God.
D: Mr Sherlock Holmes
SH: Welcome, Count Dracula.
*Dramatic music*
-- Sherlock Holmes v Dracula
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
>Vicki: Reunite with loving husband and son sword and child you just met today.
You rise from your seat as you hear Jon enter the house. You exit the kitchen and pull the blindfold off of your face. As you lay eyes on him, you think it might be the most beautiful sight you have ever seen. There they both stand, roughed up but still in one piece. You walk forward, ready to embrace them both, and can almost hear the first notes of a beautiful melody begin to play when-
Wait a minute.
This is stupid. Like, horribly stupid. Sure, you're glad that Jon is safe, and you're grateful that he brought your sword with him but does that really call for such an emotional response? Must be the loss of blood doing things to your head...
>Victoria: Nurse battered sword.
HAS HE BEEN DRAGGING IT THE WHOLE WAY HERE?!?!?
You snatch the blade from the child's hands and rush back to your seat in the kitchen. Oh no. Oh no no no no. Look at how dull the tip has gotten! Does he have no respect for a piece of art like this? You pull a whetstone from your pocket, thankful that you haven't lost it in all the chaos, and begin to sharpen it.
Oh dear, you must have been so scared. Don't worry Vagus, mommy's here, you don't have to go with that thoughtless boy again. Shhh... mommy's here.
This is... kinda creepy, you know that. It's just that right now you don't really care.
>Chester: Try a more systematic exercise of touching stuff against the "surface" the Sea. Ask the boatman if one can do it safely.
You ask the boatman- who corrects you and insists you refer to him as a "Ferryman"- and he says that he gets that request all the time. He points to a pile of sticks and tells you to knock yourself out. Just drop them into the Sea, he says, don't hold on if you want to keep your hand. Or arm. Or any part of your body, really.
For some reason Kay doesn't seem as interested in joining your activity, so you leave her to whatever she is doing. You watch as your first stick transforms into an ornate greatsword that suddenly opens its mouth and attempts to sing as it is being disintegrated by the Sea. As you continue dropping sticks (that one turned into a rabbit that began to eat its own ears), something in the back of your mind is bugging you (hamster, turned into some sort of pasta). You're not entirely sure what it is (termite mound), only that it had something to do with the less-annoying parts of your previous conversation (pumpkin, which promptly vanishes in a flash of green), and now it won't stop nagging at you. You continue to think about it while dropping sticks (a lily that burst into flame).
>Someone: Catch up with Supernal Swordsman.
Well isn't that a capital idea! It has been ages since you've chatted with that old bladeswinger, you wonder what he could be up to. Maybe he's still using your old communication device...
Comlog:
"Hey Swordsman, do you still use this thing?"
"What."
"Well look at that!"
"Who is-"
"Wait."
"You're that Delegator, aren't you?"
"What do you want?"
"I just wanted to catch up."
"How have you been doing since we split up?"
"And yeah, it's me."
"I'm going by a different appellation now, though."
"I'm a little busy right now."
"Hey DD!"
"Is that the Deviser I hear?"
"Well would you look at that."
"All we need now is the Berserker and we've got a regular reunion."
"What have you been up to little guy?"
"Well, we left for-"
"Shut up!"
"What part of 'secret mission' don't you understand?"
"Hey, you two sound a little staticky."
"What's up?"
"Look, we're in the middle of a job right now."
"What a coincidence, so am I!"
"I'm working with these pirates-"
"Oops, sorry."
"Privateers."
"Good for you."
"Hey, I'm getting the thing I showed you before we left."
"Wha- no! That is way too conspicuous."
"Do you want the entire city after us?"
"Sounds like you two are busy."
"I'll catch up with you later."
"How about never?"
Those two. Just how you remember them.
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Wow, sorry for the late update everyone. Life's been busy.
Last edited by mysticCharlatan; 05-26-2012 at 02:04 PM.
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
> Chester: Ask eeternalSolitood, or eternalSolitood, or however he spells it now why he is dropping hints about using some kind of time-travel.
> Chester: Prepare for whatever disaster it is that will require Hershel to enter the game.
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
don't hold on if you want to keep you hand.
* your
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
as it is being dissintegrated by the Sea.
* disintegrated
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
Your not entirely sure what it is
* You're
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
"Hey Swordsman, do you still use this thing?"
No matter how I adjust my main monitor, this colour is nigh-indistinguishable from the normal forum text colour (#333333), which is not the same as the compose page text colour (#3E3E3E). I can see a little difference on my laptop monitor though.
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
"All we need now is the Berzerker and we've got a regular reunion."
AFAICT, the Canadian/British spelling would be "Berserker".
Originally Posted by mysticCharlatan
"Wha- no! That is way to conspicuous."
*too
Last edited by simon.clarkstone; 05-26-2012 at 01:27 PM.
There is no word of sufficient nuance and complexity to describe your relationship with it. I hereby commission SleepingOrange to devise one.
™ Slikutkilst ™
Originally Posted by Draykon
Andrew's policy of 'antialiasing is for squares'
Originally Posted by tynic
I do my best moderating drunk. Kind of a snippy bitch when sober, actually.
Originally Posted by Miff
Originally Posted by Mubbles
Originally Posted by willgame4food
I have a feeling I'll sound stupid saying this, but what is a jailed avatar? I've never heard of such a thing?
it's the avatar you get when you're jailed.
Honest-to-god, I thought that was KawaiiMelon's actual avatar.
Originally Posted by Ed
You're kidding, right? I mean it has all these memorable characters with tons of quirks, and they also use the internet. Also homestuck is different, it's not like everything else, it is very clever and also makes fun of things. Like shipping, by including ships in the comic, popular things like, twilight and pokemon. It's also very complex yet so simple, you just have to backtrack a lot to understand every minor detail, i also love getting hocked on a plot point and then just change perspective to another character who happens to know everything about everything and everyone else who talks to that character are like WUT?!? It also has it's own memes, because memes are the pinnacle of humor.
You're rude and ignorant, Ben.
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
They will be willing to do such a thing for free if you make your work fandom-friendly, as fandom-types will devote sicknasty amounts of time under the abstract pretense that they are becoming an integral pillar of the fandom as a whole. Such a thing will win them fandom points and credits, which are good at any participating FanCon booths for the value of one free art of equal or lesser value. 4f4]Now to work on a flash where I 4f4]zoom in, pan across and zoom out 4f4]of other artists' detailed drawings at five seconds a piece.
This is called crowudsourcking in the business world and it is the newest way marketing departments across the globe have found a way to cut costs while ceasing to do anything creative themselves whatsoever so they can do more coke
Originally Posted by Wheeeeeeatthins
I, on the other hand, think that efficiency is more desirable than length. Any author can have a plot ebb out with enough updates simply by introducing more and more characters or foreshadowing and backshadowing and and having every single cause and effect chain together to make a gimmick clown alien seemingly essential to your plot because he made a plush toy appear with nebulous anger powers.
*Door opening*
W: Good God.
D: Mr Sherlock Holmes
SH: Welcome, Count Dracula.
*Dramatic music*
-- Sherlock Holmes v Dracula
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
>Ches: Go back through the chatlog; pinpoint exactly what it is that's eating you inside.
Open up your menu and are relatively surprised to find that you can in fact open and view old chatlogs, a remarkably useful feature in an otherwise obtuse and unhelpful interface. You scan over the the whole thing, mentally summing up the events. All right, there everybody is trying to keep Hershel from entering and getting himself killed. You got into a minor argument with Henrick, Liz joined in late and tried to do some stupid smiley, you went over the circumstances of Kaylyn's and your entry, you talked about predestination, some other idiots joined in, you think eS might be some sort of time traveller, and wait a minute...
>Chester: Suddenly remember your friends.
Well damn. Could it really be? You suppose it is a possibility worth looking into, if nothing else.
Contrary to all appearances, you are not insensitive to your friends. You very much care for them, despite how annoying and stupid they can be sometimes. You may lose your temper with them occasionally, but most of the time you can put up with it. In fact, sometimes you think it's why you stick around with them. You sometimes think that they need your intelligence to direct them. When your patience isn't worn to its breaking point, you spend most of your time helping your friends, pointing out their idiocies and guiding them in the right direction. It's not your fault if they don't appreciate your efforts most of the time.
Now you just need to get in contact with the friend you want to help right now.
Dialog:
"Hey Kaylyn, pass your phone."
"Whyyy?"
"Um..."
"Well."
"You could contact the others with it, right?"
"I... want to see if we can make a call."
"Oooh!"
"Weee could call the poliiice!"
"And tell them what, exactly?"
" 'Hello, officer? I've been trapped in a video game.' "
"Yeah, they'll believe that."
"I gueeess..."
"I just want to see if we can actually talk with our friends."
"This typing is getting on my nerves."
"...alriiight, I guess."
"I'm going to seee if I can get some sleeep."
"Saaaving you tiiired me ooout."
"Fine."
"I'll be quiet so as to not disturb your beauty rest."
"You're really in need of some."
"Shuuut up, I'm alwaaays beautiful."
Kaylyn gives you once last glare before closing her eyes and trying to get comfortable enough to rest.
Great. Now you have an excuse to lower your voice. You'd rather Kaylyn not know about the real reason you want her phone.
Phonelog:
"hello?"
"Lindsay?"
"Am I glad you picked up."
"ches?"
"you can call us?"
"It would appear so."
"Unless we're both imagining this."
"Which I might be from my end."
"I'm still coming down off of a Gremlin-juice high."
"really?"
"Yes."
"Kaylyn's currently purple, in case you were wondering."
"hehe"
"17's good 7o 7alk 7o you, ches"
"Same here."
"Everybody else is being an enormous idiot right now."
"7h1ngs are nu7s on our end 7oo, you know"
"I'd imagine."
"Look, there's something I want to talk to you about."
"It's... kind of awkward for me to bring up."
"ches?"
"why are you wh1sper1ng?"
"Kaylyn is still here."
"I don't really want her privy to this conversation."
"I'd rather keep her as far away from my friendly, good natured side as possible."
"um..."
"I think I just want to keep this between you and me for now."
"Are you alone?"
"ches..."
"th1s 1s k1nd of sound1ng l1ke some sor7 of confess1on"
"What?"
"Oh, no."
"No no gods no."
"Have you been talking to Liz?"
"no!"
"1'm jus7 call1ng 17 as 1 see 17"
"er"
"hear 17"
"Whatever."
"I wish she'd just drop it already."
"I mean come on."
"You and me?"
"yeah"
"1ck"
"Exactly."
"But back on topic."
"uh-huh"
"I've been thinking."
"Remember when I entered?"
"wha7 abou7 17?"
"I had that gunshot wound."
"Which I never really thanked you for treating by the way."
"Thanks."
"no prob"
"Anyway, it was gone when I entered."
"And from what I understand, Kaylyn was practically cut in half when she entered."
"The game made her good as new."
"okay"
"I'm thinking the game does its best to make everyone start on more or less equal footing."
"You know."
"Our clothing becomes default equipment."
"We each get useful abilities."
"And we're brought to perfect physical condition."
"I mean, what game starts you off at less than 100% health, right?"
"were are you go1ng w17h 7h1s, ches?"
"You really need me to spell it out for you?"
"spell wha7 ou7?"
"Come on Lindsay, think for a second."
"wha7 7he hell are you 7alk1ng abou7?"
"Oh man."
"Just."
"Just look to your right, okay?"
"alr1gh7, done"
"7here's no7h1ng 7here"
"as usua-"
"oh"
"Exactly."
"you mean you 7h1nk-"
"I don't know for sure."
"Ours were fresh injuries."
"But it is an interesting hypothesis, isn't it?"
"1..."
"Look, I'm not suggesting you jump in the game as soon as possible."
"But keep it in mind, okay?"
"If there's one person I know that's prepared for this place, it's you."
"And maybe Victoria."
"1 suppose she's pre77y good 1n a f1gh7"
"She's the only person I know who can go toe to toe with you."
"...7hanks?"
"was 7ha7 a complemen7 for me or her?"
"Let's say it was for both of you."
"Look, I've got to go."
"Kay might start to get suspicious."
"Just keep what I've said in mind, alright?"
"okay"
"...keep 1n 7ouch, alr1gh7?"
"Sure thing."
Last edited by mysticCharlatan; 05-27-2012 at 04:49 AM.
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
>Lindsay: Become ponderous. Death stalks all these friends now. Are you better served IRL, or in-game with a (potentially) whole body.
in short
>Lindsay: Weigh your options.
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
Originally Posted by Malrone
>Lindsay: Become ponderous. Death stalks all these friends now. Are you better served IRL, or in-game with a (potentially) whole body.
in short
>Lindsay: Weigh your options.
>Victoria: Notice.
I can't think of anything better, so I'm going to second this.
Good update, though. Characterisation is solid, and mood was right.
Only typo I noticed was the use of "quite" when you meant "quiet".
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
>Lindsay: Weigh your options.
Alright, this is a bit much to digest. Let's go over this slowly.
On the one hand, this game seems dangerous. Granted, the real world seems dangerous right now too with sword swinging maniacs and explosives, but you get the feeling that it will only get worse if you enter the game. Here, you know all the rules and can probably get out of the worst situations with liberal applications of fist. There you have no guarantee that even the law of gravity will be obeyed everywhere. On the other hand...
Well that's just it, isn't it? There might actually be an other hand there. The thought makes you feel a little odd. You've never felt as though your self image should be derived from your number of useable appendages, but...
>Victoria: Notice.
All right, that's the worst of the damage taken care of. You are going to have a stern talking to with Jon before this is all over.
You glance up from your efforts and notice Lindsay seems to be lost in thought. Which is odd, as she's never been the one to stop and think things through of all the people in you social circle. You suppose you should check what's up.
Dialog:
"Are you alright?"
"huh?"
"oh"
"no"
"1 mean"
"1'm f1ne"
"Lindsay?"
"well 1t's just..."
"ches called"
"Ah, I see."
"Immediate danger has made him re-evaluate his priorities, has it?"
"what?"
"he confessed feelings for you, correct?"
"WHAT?"
"no!"
"Oh."
"I'm sorry, I just thought..."
"no 17's okay"
"you..."
"your v1s1ons haven'7..."
"I'm afraid I don't know anything on that topic."
"okay"
Is it just you, or did Lindsay sound a little hopeful there?
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Active Adventures (awaiting suggestions): PersonS-like Persona, but not | An Aranor Adventure-high fantasy and adventure | Odd One Out-3 best friends, a kidnapped girl, an evil king, and elves | Beasts-a tale of survival | The Longest Flashback-fantasy noir, or something like that | GUIH-raising a dragon is harder than it sounds. | MageBound-Fantasy+"Stuck" | Creation-wherein the readers are the mind of a universe's omnipotent god | The College of Magic-pretty much what it says on the tin
Re: Recursion of Fate[TEXT] (Do. Not. Touch. The. Quintessal. Sea.)
>Lindsay: Well don't just stop talking there, actually get to what you're really thinking about!
You're getting there, you're getting there! You just want to play it cool, alright? Because the hard-to-get strategy has been working absolutely wonderfully thus far, so pretending that the potential of having a more meaningful relationship with Chester doesn't make your heart race and your spine tingle is Priority Number One. Priority Number Two: get the psychic girl to give you information about whether aforementioned relationship upgrade will ever occur. In as cool and uninterested a way as possible.
Dialog:
"you sure?"
"l1ke, one hundred percen7?"
"because"
"1'd l1ke a heads up"
"1n case he is go1ng 7o confess any feel1ngs or wha7ever"
"so 1 can le7 h1m down gen7ly"
"no7 because 1'm 1n7eres7ed 1n 7ha7 a7 all"
"because 1'm no7"
"a7 all"
"Uh-huh."
Smooth. She doesn't suspect a thing.
"Alright."
"Let me see."
"Give me your hand."
"why?"
"While normally I have no control over my visions..."
"Occasionally I can induce one if I concentrate on something hard enough."
"Physical contact occasionally helps."
"And by occasionally I mean hardly ever."
"But it's worth a try at least."
"For your peace of mind."
"r1ght"
"So that you are prepared."
"For any future confessions of affection."
"That you do not reciprocate in any way, shape, or form."
"exac7ly"
This is going great. You place your hand in Victoria's, glad that the guys are either in the living room or upstairs so they don't have to watch what surely looks very odd. She closes her eyes and a look of concentration comes over her face. You sit there for a moment feeling slightly silly, watching her face. The look of concentration passes slowly, and eventually is replaced by a relaxed, almost sleepy expression. Her head bobs once or twice and you wonder if she has gone to sleep on you. Suddenly her eyes snap open and she quickly draws her hand away from yours.
Dialog:
"Sorry."
"Nothing."
"Maybe that means there's nothing to have a vision about."
"oh"
"um"
"grea7"
"1 guess"
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