These are all stunning, wonderful work!
These are all stunning, wonderful work!
Aurora, Please
Otherwise I think they are awesome and fit with Hussie's style... Cept for "Damp"
Heir of Damp sounds silly, no? However since all the abilities's names are one syllable, I dont know any other options that would be better.
... Perhaps "rain"?
Very nice! I like how these designs, for the most part, fit into the "vocabulary"of forms established by the canon designs. I am especially fond of Soul and Fear, as they work with the canon designs without being simple transformations of them (although Death as a wilted Life is pretty sweet).
I also have some MERCILESS CRITICISMS, if you'd like to hear them. I think they'll be helpful, but I wanted to ask before I started whaling on your hard work.
Suggestions for new designs:
Hate
Will
Dawn
Stars
Bliss
Keys
Waves
Loss
I really like these, there all quite well done. I may have to use one/some soon.
Though I kinda feel like hate should be flipped, so it seems more reversed from heart. Also, lol choice kinda looks like it's shrugging. I also may be really tired right now...
If I may make another suggestion, since I have not yet seen the symbol for my fan character?
Dawn.
I'm not trying to sound mean or anything, but... "Damp" is probably the worst possible name you could've given to Water. In an RP I'm in, one of the players is Stream.
Other than that, this looks pretty good.
EDIT: Also, might I recommend different names for some of them? Just the ones that are a bit "obvious/common". Rime instead of Ice, and Stone instead of Earth.
Suggestions:
Elements:
Song (sound/buffs)
Will (determination/fire)
Runes (non-elemental magic?)
Keys (weaknesses)
Strength (mental/physical strength)
Skill (Thief/Mime of Skill could use other peoples' powers, Seer of Skill could tell what other peoples' powers are, etc.)
Classes:
Lord
Duke
Lass
Dame
Guard
Serf
Squire
Last edited by Tayo23; 12-16-2011 at 11:35 AM. Reason: Suggestions
I have not seen Cosmos suggested AT ALL. Could you do that, perhaps?
Things I have said (and probably will repeat) in Pesterchum:
I think most people are sticking with the single syllables.
As for further suggestions...
Hero of Change? Hero of Sky?
Going off Hero of Dawn, Hero of Dusk? Hero of Sun and of Moon? of Day and of Night?
(: I recognize some of these titles
oh hey i did something like this too
i haven't updated it in forever though so nearly all the canon titles are woefully out-of-date
(and yes i admit most of the classes are pretty lame, but i like to think i did an ok job with the aspects)
It looks like you're an excellent drawer. Can you do a drawing for an already existing thing?
http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread...make-GOD-TIERS
Please?
If I could make an entirely selfish request? Sand.
I always enjoy emblems like this, but of the second batch Fate and Flesh stand out as very clever designs.
No.
I was gonna suggest "Will" too, if you're making another batch.
this signeture has been HIDEN, becuse it is large
Hmmm... I don't think I like this batch quite as much, although Toil and Loss are quite excellent. I'd also like to hear your though process for some of these new ones.
Also, for Hate, having the line on the outline side have an even width looks a little weird. If you look at Love, you can see that the outline side tapers. I hope that makes some sense.
I'm so happy you did one for Flame! I was just going to use "of fire" before but then I found this and was like hey, that sounds so much better XD I'm going to use it~
Wish I had some suggestions but oh well.
~Draika Lyrryx~
~Siren of Flame~
Your chumhandle is hotpinkDraconical and you ~Always~say~everything~in~a~sing~songy~tone~
(All still in the works, not RPing yet or anything. Feel free to say hi to me though!)
Oooh, oooh, title suggestion: Plague.
Thanks for the feedback! YES.
Hero of Damp is now Hero of Stream!Im gonna do some editing and fixing up.