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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Hey so I figured I might as well post this even though I too big of a bum to actually make it pretty.

    It's a new base for the Cannikins.
    You're going to have to replace the head yourself. Just leave the bottom bit on so you can align the new one properly. I mean, unless you're making a male character. Then you can just recolor the head and change the face.
    ...I could be completely wrong though.

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    oh wow o uo

    so this is basically a forum for fankids? because all I see are fantrolls now, so this is a new thing! i will post mine soon! >u<

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    This is a thread for fankids/fanhumans, and also fanraces.

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    oooh alright! thank you!

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.




    (in lolita.)

    (out of lolita.)

    >Be a lady and introduce yourself.

    alright, fiiine. but can you get this thing moving????? pleeease? i’m kinda nervoooous!!

    >Be the cute, colorful girl...thingy. Okay.

    sounds just about easy!! thaaanks! :3


    Your name is FELICITY HLAVATY. But mainly, you go by FELI. You are SIXTEEN years old and you’re still as dull as a newborn baby. Great. Your interests include LOLITA, FASHION, COSPLAY, ANIME, STARBUCKS, and your favorite, THE INTERNET. Some people may call you WEIRD or a FREAK. But who CARES ABOUT THEM? They are just jealous. You think.

    You are somewhat of a KIND girl. You will do JUST ABOUT ANYTHING for your friends and family. You always have a smile for them. ALWAYS. But sometimes, when you’re upset, you tend to BLOCK PEOPLE from your life completely until you’re yourself again. Which usually occurs within a day or so. You CANNOT STAY MAD FOREVER. It is not like you!

    You tend to dress LOLITA from time to time. It is the cutest style ever. No other fashion can beat it. It is simply the best there is. You tend to dress up in FRILLY SKIRTS, MULTI-COLORED WIGS, TALL HEELS, and TONS OF JEWELRY and PURSES. They are all EXTREMELY COLORFUL and you just look AMAZING. Everyone who makes fun of you wish they could look awesome as fuck. They cannot. Plus you run a KAWAII DESU blog, where you post KAWAII AS FUCK pictures of yourself. The Blogging Princess is you.


    Now then, we know you’re getting restless and the internet calls. We understand. Let’s finish this up!


    Your chumhandle is strawberryLolita (typical) and you kiiinda sorta type like thiis? sometimes it sounds like you’re whining, jeez!! and then you use all these emotes, like wow, what are you even DOING???? >o>;;; anyway~



    If you were to play SBURB, a game everyone is just yapping about these days, you would dream on kawaii desu sugoi planet known as PROSPIT. Your world would be the Land of Strawberries and Chocolates. Title? The Sylph of Hope. Whatever that means.


    critiques are welcomed! ; u ; this is my first sprite edit and fankid as well, so yeah. i am open for critiques! (:

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Okay, let me see.

    You've done a good job with turning the Mom sprite into a girly one, but normally people just use the default kid sprite regardless of whether their character is 13 or 16 or 18 or what have you. It just makes things easier with manipping. Furthermore, before entering the Medium, sprites don't have any color in them apart from the color in that character's logo. Would your kid's logo be the flowers on her sash? I have to admit, when I saw that lolita sprite I thought you weren't being serious. It's really garish. To be honest, weeaboo parody characters are a little bit tired. I have a fanhuman who dresses in lolita and uses fangirl japanese myself, and I know she's not the first one.

    SBURB titles are monosyllabic, so she'd be the Sylph of Hope, or Life, or Heart or something. Also, kid names tend to be 4 letter first names (although this can easily be taken as "4 letter nickname"- Felicity -> Feli, or Flic).
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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Quote Originally Posted by Thunder Reign View Post
    Okay, let me see.

    You've done a good job with turning the Mom sprite into a girly one, but normally people just use the default kid sprite regardless of whether their character is 13 or 16 or 18 or what have you. It just makes things easier with manipping. Furthermore, before entering the Medium, sprites don't have any color in them apart from the color in that character's logo. Would your kid's logo be the flowers on her sash? I have to admit, when I saw that lolita sprite I thought you weren't being serious. It's really garish. To be honest, weeaboo parody characters are a little bit tired. I have a fanhuman who dresses in lolita and uses fangirl japanese myself, and I know she's not the first one.

    SBURB titles are monosyllabic, so she'd be the Sylph of Hope, or Life, or Heart or something. Also, kid names tend to be 4 letter first names (although this can easily be taken as "4 letter nickname"- Felicity -> Feli, or Flic).
    oooh thank you! so i basically have to change the sprite colors (i have extra ones saved), change the title, and the personality a bit? if so, i can do that whenever! and thank you for the critique. it was appreciated! and i'll do my best to make kid sprites next time. i had assumed that kid sprites were for younger characters, so i went ahead and used Mom's sprite.

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.


    Pre-Sburb

    Inside the Medium

    >Introduce yourself.

    Ooh, there's so many people here~! Hiii~! Will you be my friends?

    >Dammit, get back on topic and introduce yourself.

    Aww, okay~! There's no need to get mad!

    Your name is AIMEE FROLIC. You are THIRTEEN years old, and you have been for quiiiite a while! Your main INTEREST is in making friends. You are friends with absolutely EVERYONE YOU KNOW! And you aim to keep it that way. You also have an interest in SQUIDDLES. They are reeeeeeeeally cute~!

    You are NAIVE and CHEERFUL TO A FAULT. You always have a big smile on your face, and SKIP INSTEAD OF WALKING. Your sugary demeanor often makes people WANT TO HURL. But you are one hundred percent genuine! You love all your friends VERY MUCH, although you know there are SOME THINGS friends should never do. You would be very sad if any of your friends did these! Because then you WOULDN'T BE FRIENDS anymore. And you are friends with EVERYONE. When someone isn't your friend, they DON'T STAY THAT WAY FOR LONG.

    Your chumhandle is bloodyEmissary, and you soooometimes repeat letters and put wiggly lines at the end of your sentences~!

    Your title is the Maid of Blood, and you live in the Land of Carnage and Harmony. Your STRIFE SPECIBI are CLEAVERKIND and AXEKIND, although you prefer the former. You are also a Prospit dreamer!


    Hoo boy, that took a while. Here's a tl;dr version for all you people who didn't feel like getting diabetes from that.

    ANDREW why are Dave's shoes colored differently on pg. 6231 and pg. 6247?

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.



    You are VYRO P. DRAGON III. Your father is a CEO of a MYSTERIOUS COMPANY. Because of him, you developed an EQUALLY MYSTERIOUS GAME using some SOURCE CODE that you found on his old computer. You tend to be a HUGE DOUCHE because of the simple fact that you have nothing better to do with your utterly pathetic life.

    With the help of your very few FRIENDS, you entered the medium and fashioned the stylish green jacket you're wearing using your old, drab BLACK COAT and a GRANDFATHER CLOCK from your basement. Upon leaving your MANSION, you found yourself in the LAND OF CHEESE AND BOREDOM, where you quickly took your role as the HEIR OF TIME. Your consorts are DULL GREY MANATEES THAT ENJOY SWEARING, and you REALLY, REALLY HATE THIS GODDAMN GAME.

    You wield the PENCILKIND STRIFE SPECIBUS, which is far more effective than it seems, and you haven't slept in days because of your father's CAFFEINE PILLS, which you found lying around earlier. Because of this, you have NO IDEA if you're a Derse or Prospit dreamer, and until the pills wear off, you'll likely stay this way.

    Your chumhandle IS uselessFrustration and you TEND to emphasize words that DON'T really NEED to BE emphasized. You also REALLY wish someone would ADD YOU ALREADY, because NO ONE EVER DOES.
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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    (Reposting coming through with changes everywhere. Loopholes still present and I'm too lazy to fix it.)

    > Be the person with neurological development disorder.

    --}===> Harsh, but that is in no way a lie.



    Wait a second. This isn't the exact symbolic portrayal. But oh well, let's fetch a better... I mean simpler one.



    Now that's what I want to see.

    Your name is INK SPLATTER CAINE GRENIER. You come from an average family. From the looks, you seem like a regular 20-YEAR-OLD. Your parents PASSED AWAY since you were a child and your only RELATIVE is an ORPHANED COUSIN of yours who is a few years older than you are. You are proud to be under the starsign of LIBRA.

    Unfortunately, you aren't that NORMAL at all. You suffered a mild case of AUTISM since born, but was only discovered when you were diagnosed at the age of 3. Due to this, you have a slight SOCIAL IMPAIRMENT, POOR COMMUNICATION FUNCTIONALITY and REPETITIVE BEHAVIOR. The fact that you are impaired by this disorder gave you a HARD TIME on almost everything; From trouble with speech to short span attention. Your eating behavior is an ass to deal with too. Not to mention you are sometimes TOO FORMAL when talking and the fact that you don't have much INTERESTS. Emotional problems; One big thing you have to watch after.

    But since your case isn't too heavy, it is more likely that you will act MORE NORMAL than what you actually are. You also have a few FRIENDS who care about your condition and are willing to help. Too bad some people still dislike you anyway, but who cares? Moving to your INTERESTS, you totally love to read and write some LITERATURE. You like playing games as well despite your FLUCTUATING LEVEL OF SKILLS; You horribly suck at certain genres and yet you show decent gameplay in some others. You prefer keeping CATS as pets and your favorite weapon of choice is a SWORD. You may have more interests, but you tend to lose them easily compared to what was mentioned earlier.

    You consider SBURB as an abomination game and will never ever activate it, but if you have to, you are assigned as the KNIGHT OF MIND. Your land will be the LAND OF TRAVEL AND BEAUTY and your CONSORTS are CHEERFUL WHITE CATS who like NATURE. Your PROTOTYPE is always your DEAD PET CAT named REEVE. Or REEVESPRITE in this case. Your STRIFE SPECIBUS is bladeKind and when you retrieve items, you use the INVENTORY as FETCH MODUS. You can open up an INTERFACE WINDOW just like the ones FOUND in most MMORPG GAMES and take an item you want. You are the dreamer of PROSPIT.

    Pre-SBURB or not, you go on Pesterchum as arcaneKnight and --}===> Your style of speech and grammar may change, but you'd rather stick with the normal way of typing for most of the time.

    SUMMARY:
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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Figured i might as well paste the link to the pastebin of my fanrace here.
    http://pastebin.com/LAbVPC4R
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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.



    >Be the incredibly lucky spider.



    You are now TASAINE TUUR and you are so lucky it doesn't make sense.

    EXPOSITION DUMP

    WEBMAST'RS


    SPIID'R RELIGION

    >Let's get back to mister luck over here.

    You are TASAINE TUUR again. Fancy that.

    Anyways, you have quite a few INTERESTS, and a RELATIVELY CRAZY LIFE.

    Your primary interest is GAMBLING. You love ALL FORMS of GAMES OF CHANCE. You play them at EVERY OPPORTUNITY. Because of aforementioned UNBELIEVABLE LUCK, many CASINOS have BANNED YOU FOREVER. Not that it matters, you always just SNEAK IN WHILE DISGUISED. They never know it's you. You're just that cool.

    Another interest of yours is REALITY TELEVISION. You LOVE IT, and watch it PRETTY MUCH WHENEVER THE TV IS ON. You also like various ANIM'AY, especially of the kind with LOTS OF BADASS FIGHTING. REALM OF TREASURE and CLEANSE are two of your FAVORITES.

    Your FETCH MODUS is the ARRAY OF GAMES OF CHANCE MODUS. There are SEVERAL INDIVIDUAL PIECES TO IT. The first set of PIECES are SEVERAL CAPTCHA COINS. When you want to get an item, you can ASSIGN IT TO A SIDE OF ONE. To RETRIEVE IT, you have to FLIP THE COIN and have it land on the side of THAT ITEM. There are also NUMEROUS DICE. They work similarly to the COINS, where you ASSIGN ITEMS TO THE SIDES. And just like the COINS, you have to ROLL THE DIE and have it LAND ON THAT ITEM'S SIDE to get it. There's also a DECK OF CARDS, where items are assigned to THOSE CARDS, and whenever one is CAPTCHALOGUED, the whole deck is SHUFFLED. To retrieve an item from THERE, you just have to DRAW THAT CARD.

    You have NUMEROUS STRIFE SPECIBI. Among them are COINKIND, DICEKIND, and DECKKIND, which have special MAGICAL ITEMS IN ALL OF THEM. You also have BLADEKIND, 2XBLADEKIND, 3XBLADEKIND, and 4XBLADEKIND, for when you need to do REGULAR COMBAT.
    You live with your SISTER, and she's BASICALLY INSANE. She's always wanted a GIRL for a PAIR-PARTNER, and when you were YOUNGER, she would put you in DRESSES AND SKIRTS and WHATNOT. She would have you watch GIRLY KIDS SHOWS, and when she found out you liked REALITY TV, you began to watch GIRLY REALITY TV. She's also made you watch things like PIRATE MOONS, SANDCLOUD GIRLS Z, GLAMOUR HEAL, and VARIOUS OTHER SHOUJO ANIM'AY.

    When you were A BIT OLDER, she tried to use her WEBMAST'RY ON YOU, tying you up and attempting to perform some kind of OPERATION. The webs formed the NUMBER SEVEN ON YOUR CHEST, and as she was starting to do her work on you, you prayed to the first GODS you thought of, those of LUCK. When she TRULY BEGAN, the seven on your chest EXPLODED. She's tried to trap you since, but you will just DRAW A SEVEN IN THE AIR, and an EXPLOSION will cause her to BACK OFF. Yep, drawing a seven causes EXPLOSIONS.

    However, your sister STILL FREAKS YOU OUT with a RATHER LARGE DOLL that looks like YOU AS A GIRL. When it gets near you, you get as FAR AWAY AS POSSIBL, because you can HEAR IT TALKING. It is so terrifying it ISN'T FUNNY.

    After all that TORMENT, and by way of MANY INCIDENTS, you've learned that IF YOU PANIC, OTHERS WILL. Therefore, you are almost entirely EMOTIONLESS. You STAY CALM AT ALL TIMES, even when you're FLIPPING OUT ON THE INSIDE.

    On Palweb, your PALMONIKER is stoicHope7, and you're pre77y damn happy 7ha7 7yping seven doesn7 cause explosions

    In DVIDE, you will SHARE A LAND with SHIRIAS FAVO and OPKOMEN KNOK. You will be the GAMBLER OF LIGHT and your SECTION OF THE LAND will be the LAND OF SUN AND CASINOS. Your CONSORTS will be VULTURES that come in FOUR VARIETIES: TOURIST, BOUNCER, GAMBLER, and MOBSTER. It is VERY CHAOTIC.
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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Quote Originally Posted by llamamiah View Post
    this is a Spiid'r
    I've got these guys listed as Arach'n, should I change that to Spiid'r?

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    The Spiid'r are a kind of Arach'n, and seeing as there will be other kinds of Arach'n, the answer is yes.
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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    ==> Obligatory Introduction Begin



    Who is this prize tool?

    Your name is Ciaran Felter and you don't have time for this. Your appearance leads people to think of you as some kind of insufferable prick. Maybe they're right. You aren't sure. While you have a variety of interests that would serve as a way for casual viewers to gain a hint of knowledge about you, you AREN'T THAT DEVOTED to anything in particular. Your shades are prescription; you have a pair of clear glasses that work just as well. Get off your back.

    If you had to say, you probably enjoy COOKING and READING, although you also like other things. It's NOT THAT BIG A DEAL. You also enjoy PICKING LOCKS, although you kind of suck at it. You like HORROR and SCIENCE FICTION. Your memory isn't always that great and your attention span is pretty bad when you get interested in something. There's a lot about you that you KEEP HIDDEN, because either you forgot, you don't want people to know, or it's just cool to keep people in SUSPENSE. Incidentally, you keep TAKING NOTES about what you need to remember but often MISPLACE THEM.

    You live with your PARENTS in a small town in the South. Your dad is often gone and your mom works out of state a lot. You have an okay relationship with them.

    Your Modus is the ASSOCIATIVE MAP, where each card shows a symbol or picture you ASSOCIATE (however distantly) with the item. It's up to you to remember which item is in which card... -sigh-

    You allocated your STRIFE SPECIBUS to the POTKIND, using different cooking pots and pans. You have a STAINLESS STEEL FRYING PAN and a CAST-IRON SKILLET for various purposes.

    In SBURB, you might be the Rogue of Signs and your land might be the LAND OF FACADES AND GRAVITY. Who knows. Your consorts and denizen probably would fit whatever theme of whatever Sburb game you joined.

    Your chumhandle is surfaceUnseen and you ...can't really remember what your quirk is

    Name: Ciaran Felter
    Age: 19
    Guardian: Mother
    Symbol: Bisected circle/key
    Modus: Association
    Strife Specibus: PotKind
    Title: Mage of Signs
    Land: Land of Facades and Gravity
    Consorts: Open (Dogs)
    Denizen: Open (Naberius)
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    lastBites ==> Be the trroll.

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    ((Just something I'm writing on the spur of the moment.))

    ==> Be the poor moron who tries to make games for a living.
    Heey! II taake ooffeencee too thaat oonee!



    A guy way past his childhood years reclines in his chair, desperately passing time by attempting to make a game he's been working on without help for the past few years. However, he keeps trying, persisting and experimenting, searching for just the right formula to make the perfect game - even if it'll kill him.

    What is his name?

    ==> Luca Pavone

    I believe that's already taken by me. Try again.

    Whaat doo yoouu meeaan? Thaat iis aa niicee naame. II waant iit.

    Tough biscuits. What is -your- name?

    ==> Billy Ridman

    That's right, you're BILLY RIDMAN, and your chumhandle is ludologicPostulate. Your interests are MAKING GAMES, running games of a TABLETOP SORT with your friends. In addition to MAKING GAMES, you are an avid PLAYER OF GAMES, and even write small, HELPFUL REVIEWS.

    Yoouu aalsoo haavee aan ooood stuutteer, aand reepeeaat eeaach vooweel, buut yoouur graammaar maakees uup foor iit.

    You were raised by MUM and POPS, who constantly fret about your wellbeing, and are determined to find you a job. So far things have been vastly unsuccessful, but that hasn't stopped them or yourself from trying.

    Your Sylladex Modus is the MIGHT AND MAGIC modus. There are twelve slots divided into two arrays. One array is the INVENTORY where anything can be stored and called freely within the six slots.
    The other array is the EQUIPMENT where anything that can be worn or wielded can be put there with some limitations - You can only have one WEAPON, one ARMOUR, one HELMET and one SHIELD, but you are free to have as many TRINKETS as you please. This can possibly lead to wearing six pairs of shoes or medals over each other.
    If you want to REMOVE equipment, it will go back into the inventory if there is space, otherwise, it is EJECTED with much force.

    Your Strife Specibus is set to GLOVEKIND. Having taken up regular exercise to prevent long term health problems, you've taken up boxing too. You can use an array of gloves and mittens to augment your fighting style ranging from simple fingerless wool gloves to boxing gloves, the Roman cestus, MMA gloves and power fists.
    Although there appears to be overlap with FISTKIND, you rely on the gloves to deliver extra damage and protect your hands, and therefore cannot fight properly without them.

    Your title is the WIZARD OF CHANCE, and you have limited CONTROL OVER FATE but you lack the ability to control whether the outcome of your intervention is good or bad. You are also capable of learning WILD MAGIC, an unpredictable and chaotic form of magic that's akin to a double-edged sword - fortunately you know no spells yet.

    Your land is likely to be THE LAND OF DICE AND FROST, and you are unsure of the consorts or denizen within it.

    Once you reach God Tier, you have TOTAL CONTROL OVER FATE, and can actively determine the outcome of immediate circumstances simply by adding or removing small things that help or hinder the target.


    (( Whew. In Summary: ))

    Name: Billy Ridman
    Age: 20
    Guardian: Mom & Pops
    Symbol: Dice
    Modus: Might and Magic
    Strife Specibus: GloveKind
    Title: Wizard of Chance
    Land: Land of Dice and Frost
    Consorts: Open (Pixels)
    Denizen: Open (Ptah)
    Have a nice day!

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    People are offering critiques now? I didn't get many when I posted mine for the first time, so would it be wrong of me to repost and ask for some critique? I might as well beef up the profile while I'm at it.



    Your name is ARIAN and you are EIGHTEEN YEARS OLD. You were raised by your GRANDPARENTS your whole life, who appraised you with much LOVE AND AFFECTION. Your hobbies include MAKING MIX CDS for arduous car rides, READING any novel that you see hit the best seller shelves, and the occasional post on your PERSONAL BLOG that only your closest friends really care about. You are currently attending COLLEGE and majoring in the field of PSYCHOLOGY; you one day hope to be a PSYCHIATRIST. You're known to LOOK ON THE BRIGHT SIDE OF THINGS. Your friends seek out your optimistic advice often, but they always take your "Silver Lining" outlook with a grain of salt. Your strife specibus is BOOKKIND. Not much ado with whapping your foes in the head with the stiff spine of Looking For Alaska, but then again you aren't one for fighting. If only you had a way to COMBINE it with something rather MAGICAL. You'd have quite a nifty SPELLBOOK in your hands. You have TROUBLING and REPETITIVE dreams. Dreams of a GOLDEN CITY lined with the WHITEST OF CARAPACES. Puffy oracles overhead show you visions of a LAND OF CLOUDS AND SILVER. The carapaces whisper to each other that the SEER OF HOPE has awoken when you are around. It really weirds you out.

    Your chumhandle is misterBrightside and you have a very lax and simple manner of speaking. Until someone riles you up; in which case you must present yourself with the utmost dignity.

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Your hobbies include MAKING MIX CDS for arduous car rides
    i know it's probably sort of a strange thing to point out, but this line/idea is very charming!!! i'll leave the sprite-critique to someone more capable, but your profile seems pretty solid! c: the name of course doesn't abide the standard homestuck-flavored naming conventions, though i suppose not many do.

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
    Your hobbies include MAKING MIX CDS for arduous car rides
    i know it's probably sort of a strange thing to point out, but this line/idea is very charming!!! i'll leave the sprite-critique to someone more capable, but your profile seems pretty solid! c: the name of course doesn't abide the standard homestuck-flavored naming conventions, though i suppose not many do.
    Truth be told, that is actually a self-insert profile. My name, my hobbies, my life XD

    Except, y'know, minus the SBURB stuff.
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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    that tends to be the case with fan-humans, i've noticed! ;p

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    I suppose I misread this, then:
    the name of course doesn't abide the standard homestuck-flavored naming conventions, though i suppose not many do.
    I took it as: "That name doesn't sound very homestuck-esque"
    But now I think you mean: "You didn't name yourself 'Assbutt Bellgrande' first"
    Amirite? XD

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Nono, she meant that homestuck names are like the canon ones: John Egbert has one syllable in his first name, two in his last.

    anyway, I'll critique the sprite.

    There's nothing really that wrong with it, though humans tend to be black and white before they're in the medium (but that doesn't really matter that much, honestly). His symbol is kind of hard to see, maybe you should change the color of it a bit? If you made it the same color as his text, it'd be a lot easier to see. Lastly, maybe you could try making the bottom of the hood connect to the coat a bit more like in your avatar?



    like this, kinda

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Ohh, gotcha gotcha. And yea, I never liked the whole "black and white pre-medium" deal. Personal preference, I suppose. As far as the symbol goes, I recall there being a reason for it being gray, but I can't particularly remember. The hood-coat connection was a good point, though. Thanks

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Quote Originally Posted by Julia View Post
    Nono, she meant that homestuck names are like the canon ones: John Egbert has one syllable in his first name, two in his last.
    precisely! the kids' names all follow a four-letter pattern for first names, with either five or six letters for the surname. this isn't necessarily something you have to worry about with a fancharacter, though-- especially a character based off of yourself! we don't all have four-letter monosyllabic given names, after all. just a cute little pattern in canon. :3c

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    Re: CHUMROLL 2: I know it's only the Chumroll, but I like it, like it, yes I do.

    Quote Originally Posted by Limot View Post
    People are offering critiques now? I didn't get many when I posted mine for the first time, so would it be wrong of me to repost and ask for some critique?
    Absolutely not! You are 100% welcome to repost your profile if it's updated or if you'd like critique, assuming it wasn't on the last page or something. I keep a close eye on the thread and update profile links to the newest available pretty regularly.

    If you happen to be the sort who would prefer not to bump the thread and get the extra attention from posting profiles (I know we've got a couple folks out there who are real shy), you can also edit the original posts here or in the last thread (linked on the first page), which remains unlocked.

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