Invertebrate in the style of Hope Shouter
And a second because the first was too lame
And a third because it was funny.
She does have strong muscles you know.....
Invertebrate
mine are in my signature...
Invertebrate in the style of Hope Shouter
And a second because the first was too lame
And a third because it was funny.
She does have strong muscles you know.....
Invertebrate
mine are in my signature...
The rocket lands. The battery, charged with just enough juice to bring the rocket to the moon, finally runs out. The electromagnetic field shuts down, and there is no longer anything holding the battered iron plates together. The rocket just falls apart. This is how the people on earth made sure that no one sent to The Moon could ever come back.
"Welcome to The Lunar Prison!" a guard says cheerfully as he starts releasing the prisoners from their seats.
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One of the intro panels from The Lunar Wastes in the style of Lost in the Sky
This is indeed good advice. I need light..I-I need to get rid of these shadows.>Best to look for warmth my dear. If not, do you see firewood and flint nearby to make a hearth?
kindle the bonfire
it is much too dark here, girl
too dark for one such as you
do you know how to start the fires, girl
if not, you will have to make do
if you can, do so immediately
do not become lost in the darkness, girl
you still have much to do
The parrot looks on as Alyssa quickly gathers flint and some wood. It takes only a small spark and a little time for a roaring blaze to appear in the fireplace. He hops on the table, near the warmth.
"Oooh, this is nice. You are fast, girl. You found all that was necessary in the darkness. Impressive." The bird's screech of a voice makes it clear he would have smirked if he had a face.
"The young students were given most of the chores. I had to light and tend the fire quite often." Alyssa explains, taking a seat.
"But you are not a child, girl. You're quite pretty. Maybe you need some clothes, yes? This one thinks others could be tempted. But surely you had more important things to do than just petty chores. Tell this one."
Alyssa takes a piece of parchment from nearby, looking at it in the firelight. "I don't feel like talking about it. They didn't trust me. Speaking of, why should I trust you? Everything is wrong here."Wait, what was our overall objective? Do we really have one?
May want to press the bird for more information on why it's so important.
Predictably, he changes the subject, hopping nearer to her. "Hee hee, are you reading something? Tell me, tell me!"
She looks up, a tired eyebrow raised. "So now you can't read? And here I thought I'd found a bird smarter than me. Well, to tell the truth I'm not good at it. I was learning. This is..odd; it's some kind of warning, I guess."
She reads a few lines aloud:
"The shadows lurk in the valleys
A piercing mind shall rise
Don't let the savage swarm
Steal the soul who obeys
Cold future I promise
But wisdom is warm--"
"Hee!" interrupts the bird. "They can't talk normally, these ones. I prefer to talk with nice and pretty girl."
She glares down at him. "Stop calling me that! I'm..I'm Alyssa!"
He cocks his head to one side, not really reacting to the glare or the tone of her voice. "And what will nice Alyssa do? This one is hungry. Alyssa hungry too?"
"I'll be fine. I just need some rest."
"Alyssa is a bad liar. Hee! Maybe some other things left in here. Maybe," he paused dramatically, "you can find answers."
"I--I don't seek..." She hesitates.
He presses the attack. "Alyssa needs answers. I can see it in her eyes! Maybe answers are hidden in the shadows, yes? No-one will care if you explore a bit. No one is here. They just leave useless messages."
Now she's indignant again. "Can't you shut up for half a minute and leave me alone!? If you're hungry just scavenge something!"
"Kwaaak." He stretches out his wings. It's like the parrot is yawning at her frustration. "I'm the only one with you, little Alyssa..." he taunts.
Maybe..he's talking about the scripture room. But they wouldn't have left important texts behind! I just want to snuggle under a blanket and forget everything...
Spirits, do you remember anything about this place? The dormitory must be eerie with no one inside. Even the kitchen, the altar...there used to be some life in here. I didn't like it at the time, but I'm already missing it.
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This scene from Lost in the Sky, in my general adventure-writing style. Probably most similar to AOA, but with the thoughts to the spirits stuck back in. I retyped all the text by hand rather than copying and pasting, so I could get a better sense of the conversation flow. I ended up modifying some of the wording and phrasing in an effort to make the conversation read better.
Last edited by Xindaris; 07-06-2012 at 05:11 PM.
Got Portal 2? Come check out my maps, please!
Active Adventures (awaiting suggestions):
PersonS-like Persona, but not | An Aranor Adventure-high fantasy and adventure | Odd One Out-3 best friends, a kidnapped girl, an evil king, and elves | Beasts-a tale of survival | The Longest Flashback-fantasy noir, or something like that | GUIH-raising a dragon is harder than it sounds. | MageBound-Fantasy+"Stuck" | Creation-wherein the readers are the mind of a universe's omnipotent god | The College of Magic-pretty much what it says on the tin
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Hehe it was fun to start from rather simple panels. Maybe I should have used a more interesting panel (another time?)
And thanks crowstone. It was a kind of challenge, actually I wished I could have done better :c
Btw is a style like mine intimidating to fanart? :0 I'm by adventures like loth, coreblight...
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I think he(?) might mean 'difficult'. Not sure though.
Got Portal 2? Come check out my maps, please!
Active Adventures (awaiting suggestions):
PersonS-like Persona, but not | An Aranor Adventure-high fantasy and adventure | Odd One Out-3 best friends, a kidnapped girl, an evil king, and elves | Beasts-a tale of survival | The Longest Flashback-fantasy noir, or something like that | GUIH-raising a dragon is harder than it sounds. | MageBound-Fantasy+"Stuck" | Creation-wherein the readers are the mind of a universe's omnipotent god | The College of Magic-pretty much what it says on the tin
It'll take me some time to finish reading all the way through and catching up but here's Airships over Aranor in Hope Shouter's style!
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This scene, in the style of Jailbreak Restart. Which is basically the style of Jailbreak, but slightly different.
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HEY LOOK IT'S A DAVE, OFF SCREEN. You'd fight him but this is a non PvP zone.
You push him over to the nearest PvP zone.
Johnstuck in the style of Invertebrate.
Last edited by Wacom Guy; 07-08-2012 at 02:47 PM.
-retcon-
Hmm... Let's try this out. Invertebrate in the style of No More Eros.
After a quick check of the window to make sure Mom hadn't gotten back while I dreamt, I leap towards the door.
I haven't done this since LAST time I got grounded ten years ago, when I was six.
I wasn't really satisfied with that, though. So, I did a second one.
SHIT!
That was NOT supposed to happen!
I guess I was a LOT younger last time I did this.
Now how am I going to get out?
Hope you like it.
(void)
Yay! That was cool!
-retcon-
Kiyoshi: This statement... is... false.
Maid: This unit's logic core is protected against paradoxes.
Kiyoshi: Uhhh... "What is the sound of one hand clapping?"
Maid: This unit's logic core is also protected against Zen Koans.
Kiyoshi: You're fat?
Maid: This unit's logic core is DEFINITELY protected against weak insults. Also, this unit has maintained it's gravitational exertion within a 10% margin of error. Everyone puts on 10 pounds around the holidays.
Kiyoshi: Did I mention Takeshi really like robots? Like... A LOT?
Maid: Oh, come on. No girl would fall for that line.
No More Eros
I guess I will do this thing
EDIT:
Eddie: Iron Cossacks, eh? You guys must be new in town. Do you folks speak English?
Thug: Yes, now get truck out of our way.
Eddie: No can do, but I CAN give you a traditional Caper City Welcome.
Thug: And what is that?
Honor Amongst in the style of Hard Work.
We Were Rogues in the style of Push the Button.
-retcon-
We Were Rogues in the style of To Shreds!
... I mean, it seemed fitting at the time.
Sorry for the delay
OW HOLY FUCK WHAT IS THIS FUCKING THING OW GET IT OFF IS IT SHOCKING ME IT FEELS LIKE I'M BEING SHOCKED HOLY DICKS HOW MANY VOLTS ARE IN THIS LITTLE ASSHOLE GAAAAAAAH
To shreds in the style of Lost in the Sky
Space Squid looking like my only adventure
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